Log in

where bad!fic is torn to little tiny pieces
Recent Entries 
「stock」★ your aura captivates me。

The Lost Airbender by The Green Phoenix reviews
A young airbender named Tye has survived the firenation attack on the Southern Air Temple. What will happen to him?
Avatar: Last Airbender - Fiction Rated: T - English - Action/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 6-16-06 - Published: 6-16-06

Chapter Navigation: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3

Hoping to hear from you,

16th-Jun-2006 12:24 pm - To Be Reviewed
「stock」★ your aura captivates me。
Here's a list of fics that I'll probably be reviewing.  If the fic has already been reviewed, there will be a little smiley wielding a sign linked to the review below the summary.

There will be more to come, of course, and don't hesitate to suggest a fic!

16th-Jun-2006 12:12 pm - Fanfiction Suggestions
「stock」★ your aura captivates me。
If you see a bad!fic that you think is in dire need of a good, long concrit, leave a comment to this entry. However, make sure to check my existing queue of fics before you suggest anything. Suggestions should be in this format:

Feel free to link to your own fic, even if it's not a bad!fic. Just keep in mind that I'm giving long, in-depth concrits here, not just review padding.

Also, please not that I have a particular structure for the priority of the fanfics being reviewed, and that would be:

  1. Follow-ups of existing fics (I will review new chapters from stories tagged with "#will review future chapters" first).
  2. Suggestions to this entry, in chronological order.
  3. Anything else I see.

16th-Jun-2006 11:46 am - "Maya" by SketchLives09 (chapter 1)
「stock」★ your aura captivates me。

Maya by SketchLives09 reviews
After stumbling across Maya, Zuko learns he's not the only one dealing with problems as painful and deep as his. Rated M for later chapters ZukoOC Email for better summary
Avatar: Last Airbender - Fiction Rated: M - English - Romance/Action/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 549 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 6-11-06 - Published: 6-11-06

Well, at least the summary's legible.  Plus, there is no instance of the word "mysterious", so that's a definite plus.  Let's begin, shall we?

Chapter Navigation: Chapter 1 | Chapter 2

16th-Jun-2006 09:54 am - History, Rules, Resources, etc.
「stock」★ your aura captivates me。
In the beginning, there was lord_hades.  And the good lord_hades said unto himself, "Let there be Hunter x Hunter fic."  And there was Hunter x Hunter fic.  And it was good.

There are only a few rules that I ask you to follow while in my domain.  Breaking these rules will make me lose respect for you, and may also result in you getting banned from commenting.

If you are interested in improving your fic,
there are many resources to be found on the internet.  I'll post links to the best ones that I find, as well as anything else that is of interest.

Also, this should be of interest to many writers, and not just of bad!fic:

With the best regards,
This page was loaded Feb 23rd 2017, 10:58 pm GMT.